91 banana
Fruit Valley
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4.4.8
Dear: Mum and Dad,
I hear splashing in the waves. the waves are pushing the boat. I see the chip far away the sand is sooth the wave are like jelly. The chips it smells like chicken. I ate the chip it was chicken chips. chicken I went back and touched the sand and the water.
Where am I?
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Reflection;
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses. I enjoyed writing and I was trying to make long sentences. Something I found tricky was proofreading for sense. Next I will put capital letters in the right place.
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